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though our love rare
we make the perfect pair
though saocity looks down
trying to make us frown

i know its true
i've fallen in love with you
They are blind
only listening to there mind
holding back in the heart
ruins the whole art

they say we are wrong
i will prove your the only one
our hearts will always be strong


we will always be
                          you and me
©2007-2010 ~Miles-tails-sonic
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i never want to say anything here but i have to D:

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Keep it up. There may be a couple misspellings but I can tell you put some thought into this. I like your choice of subject matter too. I'm afriad I don't typically like poetry so I can't really give you a fair critique. I,personally, would really like to see a longer one though. Perhaps a short story in poety from.

Good job ^_^

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thanks, yeh i cant spell so good...
thanks though, hmmm i should try to make a long poem , just struggle with the idea

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